As a Creativity Coach, plot consultant, and editor, I help authors elevate their writing, strengthen their storytelling, and prepare their manuscripts for publication.
Writing fiction is a creative and rewarding journey, but crafting a novel that truly captivates readers takes more than a good idea. It requires compelling characters, immersive point of view, authentic emotion, strong conflict, believable settings, and a plot that keeps readers turning pages long into the night. That is where I come in.
I specialize in developmental editing for cozy mysteries, cozy paranormal mysteries, paranormal romance, urban fantasy, sweet romance, rom-coms, sci-fi romance, and supernatural academy fiction for young adult, new adult, and adult audiences.
With more than fifteen years of experience in publishing, I bring both editorial expertise and hands-on industry knowledge to every project. My background includes studying Creative Writing in college, owning an indie eBook publishing company, working as a developmental and acquisitions editor for a publisher, and spending the last decade freelance editing and ghostwriting for successful authors.
I have also been traditionally published under pen names, published through an independent press, and now proudly publish as an indie author. I am the author of nine fiction novels and ten nonfiction books, with multiple titles appearing on Kindle bestseller lists and receiving recognition from prominent review sites.
I work with only a select number of clients each year, which allows me to give each manuscript thoughtful, in-depth attention. If you are interested in working together, please contact me directly to discuss your project and request a quote.
Please note that this service does not include copy editing or proofreading. Because those are best reserved for the final stage of the publishing process, I recommend waiting until all revision work has been completed before booking either service.
As of April 2024, all services include a five percent processing fee to cover administrative and transaction costs. Clients who prefer to avoid this fee are welcome to pay via Zelle.
I schedule projects on a first-come, first-paid, first-served basis, and availability is limited. If you would like to work with me on your next manuscript, I encourage you to reach out early.
Editing Services
One Full Developmental Edit:
My developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements that make a story truly work, including plot, pacing, characterization, point of view, and narrative voice. You will receive thoughtful, in-depth feedback designed to help you strengthen your manuscript at every level.
I provide practical suggestions and revision strategies to help you deepen POV, craft memorable characters, strengthen your plot, and enhance the emotional and narrative impact of each scene. I also note opportunities to polish the prose and improve flow, including light attention to awkward sentences where needed.
Every critique includes an honest, professional assessment of your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses, along with clear, actionable guidance to help you revise with confidence.
I will comment and offer suggestions on issues that include:Conflict / Tension
Plot development
Character ARC / Goals
Show versus tell (Deep POV)
Opening and closing scenes
Pacing issues
Setting and descriptions
Redundancies
Clichés
Dialogue exchanges and dialogue tags
Point out repetition (including overuse of certain words or phrases)
Indicate any clarity issues
Give feedback on what could be improved
Recommend fact-checking
Point out any wordy prose
Comment on any awkward sentence structure
Point out any inconsistencies
Include examples of improvements, if possible
Comment on any awkward sentence structure
Point out any inconsistencies
Prices start at $0.02 to $0.04 per word. Pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
*Urgent deadlines or rush projects may incur additional fees due to the need for expedited work.
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Line-Editing for AI-Assisted Fiction:
This service is for authors who have used AI tools to help draft their stories and want to ensure the final manuscript reads naturally, human-like, and professionally.
Have you used AI tools to help draft your story, but want the final manuscript to sound natural, polished, and truly your own?
This service is designed for authors who want to refine AI-assisted fiction so it reads smoothly, feels authentic, and meets a professional standard.
I carefully review your manuscript for obvious AI patterns and language issues, including repetitive or unnatural phrasing, clichéd or mechanical dialogue, overused dialogue tags, clunky transitions, generic narrative voice, and any leftover AI notes, bracketed text, or prompt remnants.
You will receive a marked-up manuscript with clear, thoughtful feedback and revision suggestions to help you strengthen the prose while preserving your unique voice and creative vision.
This is a confidential, judgment-free service. And I am discreet. Trust me to help your voice shine through.
Prices start at $0.03 to $0.04 per word / Minimum project size: $150. Final pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
*Urgent deadlines or rush projects may incur additional fees due to the need for expedited work.
First Chapter Critique:
This service is for authors who have used AI tools to help draft their stories and want to ensure the final manuscript reads naturally, human-like, and professionally.
Have you used AI tools to help draft your story, but want the final manuscript to sound natural, polished, and truly your own?
This service is designed for authors who want to refine AI-assisted fiction so it reads smoothly, feels authentic, and meets a professional standard.
I carefully review your manuscript for obvious AI patterns and language issues, including repetitive or unnatural phrasing, clichéd or mechanical dialogue, overused dialogue tags, clunky transitions, generic narrative voice, and any leftover AI notes, bracketed text, or prompt remnants.
You will receive a marked-up manuscript with clear, thoughtful feedback and revision suggestions to help you strengthen the prose while preserving your unique voice and creative vision.
This is a confidential, judgment-free service. And I am discreet. Trust me to help your voice shine through.
Prices start at $0.03 to $0.04 per word / Minimum project size: $150. Final pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
*Urgent deadlines or rush projects may incur additional fees due to the need for expedited work.
First Chapter Critique:
The first chapter is crucial. I can help writers make sure that their opening is superb. I promise you’ll have a cohesive idea on how to make it “hook” your reader. (*one pass only).
Prices start at $0.02 per word. Pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
*Urgent deadlines or rush projects may incur additional fees due to the need for expedited work.
First Three Chapters Critique:
First Three Chapters Critique:
I will critique your first three chapters to ensure that these vital pages have a strong enough "hook" to lure your reader into the story. This service points out conceptual problems within the beginning chapters such as story arc, plot structure, lack of visual description, character ARC, any pacing problems, and suggestions on necessary revisions. (*one pass only)
Prices are $0.03 per word. Pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
Proofread and Line-Editing:
I will proofread your work to check for misspelled words, typos, and awkward sentence structure, and offers suggestions on necessary revisions. (*one pass only)
Prices start at $0.04 to $0.07 per word. Pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
*A 5% processing fee is included with all services. (To avoid the fee, Zelle payments are encouraged.)
*Rush projects or urgent deadlines will incur extra fees.
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Chapter-by-Chapter Beta Read Critique:
Can’t afford a developmental edit? This personalized beta reading service offers a more budget-friendly way to receive thoughtful feedback on your manuscript.
I will read your manuscript and provide honest, personalized feedback on each chapter, highlighting what is working well, what may need improvement, and where revisions could strengthen the story. My comments may address areas such as pacing, tone, character development, plot structure, genre expectations, dialogue, and overall coherence.
Please note that this is not a developmental edit or line edit. It is a critical beta read designed to help you evaluate and polish your narrative one chapter at a time.
(*one pass only).
I will read your manuscript and provide honest, personalized feedback on each chapter, highlighting what is working well, what may need improvement, and where revisions could strengthen the story. My comments may address areas such as pacing, tone, character development, plot structure, genre expectations, dialogue, and overall coherence.
Please note that this is not a developmental edit or line edit. It is a critical beta read designed to help you evaluate and polish your narrative one chapter at a time.
(*one pass only).
Prices start at $0.01 to $0.02 per word. Pricing varies based on genre and the quality of the draft provided.
Turnaround time:
Once the manuscript has been submitted, the critique will be done within 4 to 8 weeks. Times may vary depending on the length of the manuscript.
*Please note: This service is only available in the English language.
Office hours are Monday–Friday, 12pm–6pm PST. Closed on weekends and all major holidays.
*Please note: This service is only available in the English language.
Get a free quote today!
I offer all new clients a complimentary 3-page edit with no
obligation on full-length novel services. Please contact me for details
and an initial consultation.
*Rush projects or urgent deadlines will incur extra fees.
Reminder, I work on a first-come (paid), first-served basis, so if you're looking to collaborate with me on your next project, get your requests in early!
Office hours are Monday–Friday, 12pm–6pm PST. Closed on weekends and all major holidays.
As of April 2024, all services include a 5% processing fee to cover administrative and transaction costs. (To avoid the fee, Zelle payments are encouraged.)
DISCLAIMER
As a writing mentor, my goal is to help writers polish their work, strengthen their skills, and continue growing in their craft. At the same time, writing and editing are subjective by nature, and many of my suggestions will reflect my professional experience, editorial background, and individual perspective.
While I always do my best to provide careful, thoughtful feedback, I am human and cannot guarantee that every error will be caught. I also cannot guarantee that my critique will lead to publication or representation by an agent. This is a highly competitive, talent-based industry, and success depends on many factors, including persistence, hard work, and a willingness to learn.
I will always aim to offer honest, helpful guidance that supports your goals as a writer. What you choose to do with that feedback, and how you apply it, is ultimately up to you.
