It my pleasure to have writer, Ciara Ballintyne on the blog to share
her insight and views on plotting vs. pantsing for us.
Are
you a plotter or a panster?
I used to be a pantser. Now I’m more of a plotter, and I
outline before I start a novel, although I’d like to think I fall in the
category known as ‘discovery writers’ – writers who plot, but will follow an
inspirational plot idea even if it wasn’t in the outline.
Why
do you prefer one to the other?
When I was a pantser, I’d get to the end and the story would
be a mess, with unresolved conflicts, subplots that trailed off, muddled
themes, characters with unclear goals, or insufficient motivations, or not
enough conflict to attaining their goals. Revision was a nightmare.
In fact, I never successfully revised a novel I pantsed. I
have one I do want to resurrect, but there’s no point starting with what I
have. I’ll have to go back to the basic plot idea, outline, and then rewrite
from scratch. I expect that story to change significantly.
Do
you think the panster can exist without the plotter?
As in can there be light without dark? Dark is the
absence of light. A plotter is not, I think, the absence of a pantser -
although one might argue a pantser is the absence of plotting.
That said, the concepts are so inextricably
entwined, not so much with each other, but with the concept of plotting, it
would be difficult to explain either without the reference point of plotting,
and once we assume we need that reference point, it becomes obvious there are
two main methods of plotting: outlining, and no outlining. It would be
difficult to conceive of one existing but not the other.
Some
writers say, ‘the road to hell is paved with good outlines.’ Thoughts?
Sure, it can be. It is possible to outline too much, the
same way I’s possible to revise too much or edit too much. If you outline too
rigidly, and then stick to it too closely, you can wind up with something that
feels unnatural, or you can miss some great opportunities fort alternate plot
ideas, just because they weren’t in the outline.
This is why I’d like to think I’m a discovery writer – I
will happily abandon the outline if I think I’ve had a better idea that will
take the story somewhere great.
Can
you describe your outlining process?
Usually I start with the seed of an idea – a protagonist who
wants something, and maybe why. If not why, I have to think of a why. Then I
have to decide what’s stopping her from attaining her goal. This brainstorming
process will usually toss up a number of obstacles, and usually a few
two-dimensional characters. I’ll choose the ones I like, and flesh out all the
characters by analyzing their goals, motivations and conflicts. This may
present some additional potential conflicts I hadn’t considered, so I may add
in some more sub-plots at this point.
The important thing is to make sure that everyone has a
reason for the actions they take, and is sufficiently frustrated in achieving
the outcome they want.
What
is the benefit of outlining your plot?
More consistency, less problems with contradictions in the
plot, solid motivations for all the character actions (i.e. you don’t find a
character doing something that is completely incomprehensible in the
circumstances) and proper obstacles to all the characters obtaining their
goals.
You can get the same outcome with pantsing, but it takes
more effort – more thinking about those issues as you write instead of just
getting the story down, more rewriting, more scene shuffling.
Can
writers be both a plotter and a pantser?
Yes – that’d be what I referred to above as a discovery
writer. I got the term from Brandon Sanderson, who described Robert Jordan this
way. The Wheel of Time Series was outlined as three books – the final and
fourteenth book is due out in January. This occurred simply because Jordan kept
having new ideas for plots that weren’t in the outline.
The degree to which a writer is a discovery writer, however,
can vary. Jordan was an extreme example. Other writers might stick to the
outline more than they deviate from it.
Do you consider yourself
a Linear or Non-linear writer? And why?
Linear. I write the book front to back, and I write, then
revise, then edit. I don’t do any revision while I’m writing that first draft –
if I did, I’d never get it finished. This makes sense since I’m also a linear
thinker.
What
do you consider a downside of plot outlining?
I haven’t found one for me so far. It may not work for
everyone, but it fits my brain. This is how I think, logically, and in order,
so it’s the best way for me to organize my thoughts.
Do
you do some “pantsing” for certain scenes and “plot” outlines for others?
I outline the entire novel at a high-level, but I don’t
outline individual scenes. So in some sense, every scene is pantsed. I kind of know
the key points that need to be hit in each scene, but how I hit them – that I
make up as I go.
In my current WIP the outline said something like ‘Attempts
to steal the artefact and fails’. When I outlined that, I didn’t consider that
was at least 30,000 words. I pantsed that completely, because, hey, I had to
write something.
Where
do you get your best ideas for plots?
Where does gamma radiation come from? I don’t know.
Sometimes a song will spark an idea, but most of the time an
idea just hits me. Terry Pratchett’s theory in his Discworld novels, of
inspiration particles streaming through the atmosphere, hoping against hope
they strike a brain that can actually use them, works for me.
If
you do outline for a novel, how much time and research do you do before
starting the actual writing of the novel?
My next novel I outlined in one evening. So I guess that’s a
few hours. I do zero research, but that’s the liberty of writing high fantasy.
I may spend some time worldbuilding if it’s a new world, but I’m playing in the
same world for the next six novels of so, so that’s done and dusted for a bit.
What is your process for exploring your
characters?
My characters usually come to me
as thumbnail sketches. I usually am forced to flesh that out a bit during the
outlining process when I do the goal, motivations and conflict chart, because
without some idea of character, you can’t know why a character might do
something.
Do you fill out character Bios/interviews for
your main characters before writing their story?
Yes, I use short character
profiles – although I admit I have one character I’ve been meaning to do a
profile for and just haven’t yet. No idea why. All the other key characters
have one. I may be procrastinating because he’s a slippery character to pin
down.
What is one writing book that you highly
recommend?
Honestly, I haven’t read a lot of
writing books, but I did enjoy Stephen King’s On Writing.
Do you tend to write scenes
out of order or stay on track?
In order. If they get reordered during revision, that’s
purely because I later decided the scenes would benefit from being in a
different order.
Do
you write a synopsis for each book before you write it? Does your publisher/editor
request a synopsis?
I write an outline, but not a synopsis per se. If the book
stays relatively true to the outline, it can be used to build a synopsis,
otherwise I need to do one from scratch.
Where
during the writing process do you find your “voice” for that particular novel?
Where does gamma radiation…. Nevermind.
I struggle with voice. People tell me they love my voice,
but I have no idea what it is. I think it stays fairly consistent from novel to
novel – it’s me, my style, my way of stringing sentences together. Where it
varies, it’s to match the voice of the point of view character, and no more.
While
you might start with an issue or theme in mind, themes will also develop or
emerge as you write, so how important do you think “theme” is to your writing
process?
I don’t start with a theme, although I can usually find them
and strengthen them at the end. But since theme is something I largely play
with upon completion, I wouldn’t say it’s at all important to my writing
process.
Fun Bonus Questions
What book are you currently reading?
A
Breath of Snow and Ashes by Diana Gabaldon.
What’s your favorite movie or TV show?
Currently
SUPERNATURAL.
Favorite color?
Red
How would you describe yourself in three words?
Particular,
opinionated and outspoken.
Laptop or desktop?
Whatever’s
available.
Who is your fictional character crush? (Movie, TV show,
literary)
I did
always kind of like Angel from Buffy, but these days I’d say it’s more Richard
Rahl from Terry Goodkind’s Sword if Truth
series.
Where can potential readers
find you online?
Official
Website: http://www.ciaraballintyne.com
Blog:
http://fantasyblog.ciaraballintyne.com
Twitter: @CiaraBallintyne http://twitter.com/ciaraballintyne
Author
Bio:
Ciara Ballintyne is
a writer of high fantasy, lawyer, and dragon expert. Bent on world domination
and born argumentative, Ciara invested her natural inclinations in a career in
law. Her short story, A Magical Melody, is available as part of the Spells: Ten Tales of Magic ebook
anthology.

Love this post Ciara! I was a confirmed pantser until recently. I loved the discovery allowed by winging it, but it got me through seven drafts of a novel with no end in sight, just lots of material. Then I read two books -- The Art and Craft of Story by Victoria Mixon and Story Engineering by Larry Brooks, and I knew my time as a total panster was done. I used the tools in their books to re-outline my novel based on a three-act structure, and suddenly it was easy to see what I needed to cut and what I needed to keep -- and also where to shuffle scenes around.
ReplyDeleteI do like what you say about being a "discovery" writer, because even within an outline I sometimes get a better idea for a scene and decide to change things -- but it's so much easier to see macro problems with plot and character from an outline than from deep in the trenches of writing the draft.
It took me a year to pants the seventh draft of my WIP. But with an outline based on three-act sturcture, the eighth is on track to take just under three months. I'm convinced this is a better way to write.
Glad you like it, David :-) I outline using the Goal Motivation Conflict method, but there are certainly plenty of choices to allow every plotter to find the method that best suits them. I, like you, used to 'wing it', but I never even made it to a second draft on any of them - I knew the stories had problems, but I had no way to see the forest for the trees. GMC matrices allowed me to pinpoint plot holes, and when outlining, to head them off at the pass. I, too, wrote my first outlined novel in three months where I previously averaged a year.
DeleteOne of my favorite commentaries on this issue that I've read. I could relate to many points discussed here. Personally, I tend to start as a pantser, but if I don't outline shortly after starting, I lose all momentum and everything grinds to one epic halt.
ReplyDeleteGlad you could relate. I don't start as a pantser, but I pants a lot in the middle - having an outline to start from allows me to better see where the 'brilliant' idea I have in the middle is indeed brilliant - or not so brilliant...
DeleteI must be plot outline challenged because I've never been able to outline. Even in college writing classes I couldn't do it. Just turn me loose, let me start typing and see where I end up.
ReplyDeleteNot everyone can outline. I think it depends on how your brain works. I wonder if there is a connection between being left-brained and plotting (logic) and being right-brained and a pantser (feeling).
DeleteThis was a very informative post. As an aspiring novelist, I have four books that I am working on currently. Two of them are completely outlined with in-depth information. Each part of the outline lists what each of the characters is doing and thinking. My outline is 25 pages single spaced. With that said, I have made changes based upon how the dialogue develops.
ReplyDeleteI am writing my newest book idea without an outline. Instead of focusing on the plot of this book, I am focusing on the characters and letting the plot develop around them.
Ciara, your posts and website are so helpful and informative. Although I am holding off on publishing until I finish my graduate thesis, I feel like I have a head start in my publishing goals because of the information that you have provided.